12/08/2019
With Independence Day almost upon us, here is a poem by Mr. Patrick Redican about freedom, hope, and counting blessings.
Title - August 15, 2018, Jejuri
In Jejuri August 15th is all about the children.
They get up early, bathe, put on their best-pressed-fresh uniforms
and hurry in the dawn light to school to raise the flag,
then join the other schools for the prabhat pheri through the town.
They pass the massive Nandi at the temple steps,
but few pay any heed to the God above.
It doesn’t matter; He gets attention
on his own days, and they are many.
Today the god is freedom, and though so many years
of wear and tear, so much experience
of our own shortfall might be expected
to have reduced the shine, we feel exhilarated.
For the children it’s being seen, proud in shining uniforms
For us proud watchers it’s all about prosperity
our children educated, on their way to something more
fulfilling our potential.
This is little changed from 1947.
We still look to a bright future, looking indeed at our future
as, at the palkhi maidan we give plaques and raise cheers
to those that topped the 10th and 12th exams
and honour those who’ve done the village proud:
teachers, social workers, artists.
My elder son is honoured
for his contribution to ‘English literature in Maharashtra’,
a smallish field but still, something to be proud of.
There are no tiresome speeches. The politicians must be off
for more important functions with more important people.
There is a lot of cheering, the kids are off for their half holiday,
the adults greet each other, happy, proud
of what we’ve seen and felt on this one morning anyway.
It’s not assumed, it’s not some plastic mask,
we do all feel that we have come some way,
that India through all its troubles grows,
and not in spite of us, well not completely.
Of course the road down to the maidan,
is an extended hopscotch square of muddy ruts and potholes;
of course we’ve made a mess of education
the children we so treasure, are badly served
by these same schools we celebrate today.
The politicians have no vision, the citizens seek profit first and last.
Whatever we can point to as accomplishments:
the dam, MIDC, this maidan, the concrete renovation of the town,
are nothing to the many chances missed:
We could be so much better than we are.
But that’s for other days:
Today’s a day for counting up our blessings,
the first among them, children.
The first among them, freedom,
that we may yet make more of, that we may yet
use selflessly to make our children proud.
The rain that paused while flag was raised and anthem sung,
and pledge was heard, and maybe took new root,
comes on as we go home.
Its green below the grey; above the clouds,
the saffron sun shines still; and in between
Hope yet holds our innocence.